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She holds on tight,
but he lets go,
She needs him,
but he doesn't need her,
She believes,
but he gave up,
She loves him,
but he never loved her.
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Was It Love?by CrazedBunny-26857

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse©2012-2014 CrazedBunny-26857
Short and sweet.
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DeaththePuppy Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It speaks so true to reality, nice work again.
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10kdays Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing! It's short but it conveys a lot in only a few lines. Great work :)
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CrazedBunny-26857 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Aww thanks >3<
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10kdays Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome.
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